Very nice ending. Makes me a bit afraid to read the rest of the story. I feel more angst coming on, which is good painful, obvously a sign that im a masochist.

The angst...it hurts so good. Love it.

Oh, how very sad. I want to shake Reilly and hug Deinton all at the same time. The angst, the angst, its killing me.

Oh, that last line was just perfect. And of course the Dainton/Reilly lovin was hot.

Finally, Some Dainton/Reilly lovin. Great chapter.

The cliffhangers are killing me. I need to go to sleep but I can't stop reading.

Oh, the tension is killing me. I love it.

I'm suddenly very hungry for lasagna...and some Reilly/Dainton lovin.

Great first chapter. The attempted suicide scene was well written.

Perfect. You pulled it off so well. There were so many time where I expected to be let down, but each time you guys pulled through. So many time, the transition from enemies to friends to more is too jerky and makes no sense but you made it seem like the most natural thing in the world.

They better be fucking like rabbits by the end of this story
good stuff btw :)

Good story. I'm happy that I was able to read it. Good job. Just one thing, the neverending POV change gets a little tiring for a real story. I believe you each had a character and wrote his side of the story and then the other one would do the next paragraph or something. But the probleme is that the reading isn't as smooth because the story seems too shoppy. On the brighter side it's fluffy enough and not overly dramatic and though I read lot of similar stories yours pull it off rather well (please forgive my bizzare english I'm too tired to write properly and verify every word I'm unsure of)

absolutly possitivley outright amazing. Really, it was that great! I am very much looking forward to a sequal, though that was a fantastic, if odd, ending. I was so woried that nothing would hapen after the last chapter! Even though there are still *several* loose ends and we're left with a severe case of the "what's next?"'s, it seems as if all is right in their world. All that really matters is that they have eachother.
The story itself was really well written. I've probably said it before but i'll say it again; i love the way you use words! just the simple choice of one word over another makes the whole thing flow so much easier. You are truly talented. The imagry in your writting is another fine point. I adore a story that gives me a good 'picture'. I can pratically see it like a movie!
Well, now that i've written a *novel* review, I'll cnclude by saying Congrats! You impresses me!

omg this story had me occupied the ENTIRE DAY how dare you! lol...

just wonderful - thank you so much for writing it both of ya

WHAT!?! IT'S OVER!?! Oh, but there's a sequel... alright. Haha, from the beginning of the chapter, it kind of seemed like the end of a book. I'm glad I saw it coming; makes me feel smart and... junk. Anyways, this was amazing! I loved it. So cute and nice and sweet and drama-y and angst-y-ish. Lovely literature! You can count on me to read the sequel, for sure, and I think I may just check out some of your other writing.

Keep up the good work and see you in another review!

~ R!n