Reviews for It's hard to say Good Bye

Williamchan87 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseeven if it seems quite odd of a poem, but keep it up...! :)
Indirect Object 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseI knew from long -- don't get this line. Doesn't make much sense. Why is there no punctuation at all, besides quotation marks? My hearthaches from missing you -- should have a space between heart and aches. This is very confusing yet still it seems like all you did was write a broken up (and very unoriginal) letter and separated it into lines. In order to have a successful poem, you generally need two things: imagery, and a message. You've got a message, most poems do. But where's the imagery? All of this stuff has been said before. Reinvent it, say it in a new way. It doesn't stand out the way that it is.
simpleplan13 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseThe first line seems really odd... shouldnt it be I knew it all along or I knew it for long or something? I really love that second stanza... very bittersweet piece and wonderfully done
Willy Boy 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseaw...:(