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| Moon-Chaser 2008-03-10 ch 2,  | abuseThis is an interesting one. I like the way that you wrote this. keep it up. |
| Moon-Chaser 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseShort, simple, sweet. I like the last line, it is so true. keep it up. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this... the last line is really sad and it's something I can really relate too... the only thing is italicizing and putting quotes around the quote seemed a bit excessive... anyhow nice job PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
| Crying-Without-Tears 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseaw |