Very interesting. The "I prefer snowmen that aren't dead" comment made me laugh. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

Wow! Great poem!

Again, you've managed to catch my attention. I can really late to this, no matter how bizarre it seems. I live in the city, so all snowfalls are tainted. Thus, all snowmen die young and are reduced to piles of sludgy snow.

I like how you portray this. I like how you've placed the line 'Sh, you’re not supposed to notice that!' there, as if the narrator's trying to convince him/her self that there really is a winter wonderland out there.

I like how it all comes back to the topic of ice (or lack of it), in the end.