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| Aelfin 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuse"still I write your name through the crimson stain." I love this line =] I also found the last three lines particularly effective. Although, really the entire piece is a work of art ^_^ Its dark, and yet you've avoided those terribly cliche lines that i always find myself spewing when writing this sort of poetry! Nice work. Aelfi x |
| Moon-Chaser 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, this felt powerful, seeing someone you love turn a blind eye to something so obvious, it leaves be breathless the way people act towards others sometimes. I love the way that you ended this. Keep it up. |