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Reviews For: You Aren't As Quiet As You Think
Anna Christie 2009-02-20 . chapter 1
Ooh, haha, I love this. I know how that feels, man! Nice piece... think I'll favorite it. :)
Black Feather Quill 2008-03-11 . chapter 1
I LOVE this poem. Great job. I would love to show some people in my math class this...

BFQ
simpleplan13 2008-03-09 . chapter 1
Hold all around me and the... past tense seems wrong

You don't need to yak your mouthes off to the person next to you... mouths.. also I think that line is a bit long

I love the parts in parenthesis and the idea of whole piece... I have thought things like this a lot.. I also like the three lines beginning with every.. one thing in the beginning I might not use conversations twice.. I might use discussions or something

Really great piece

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Dreaming Chica 2008-03-08 . chapter 1
I can relate to this! I like the words in bracets, how they change the meaning of the sentence!

Nicely done!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
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