Good Story! Very entertaining! I read many works on this site and I was very inmpressed with this one! I also like to give feedback. I enjoyed how readers were able to create the mind pictures of the settings and people as they read... Not just all at once. If I were to give advice, I felt a few times you would get away too much with details, rigth in the middle of an action, therfore taking away for that of the action. So maybe even it out and make it flow a little more. But other that that, great job, and keep it up!

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I thought this was great. I've never read a story on here that is like this, the originalty of the plot sparkled through. The dialogue you have is very natural, though it descends into talking heads a little in the larger snippets of dialgoue so watch out for that.

The way that the end ties in with the beginning shows that this has been well planned out. Good job, it was really interesting and I'd love to know more about the bear society