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HinaMika 2008-07-21 ch 3,	abuseDon't leave us with a cliffhanger like that! You have to update soon. Preferably tomorrow, but I can wait longer if I have to (the next chapter, please?)
magalina 2008-07-16 ch 3,	abuseI feel bad for Jude... Even if he started it. I have a bad feeling about him -_- I hope you don´t kill him off D: Greg no! And he didn´t even offered them the drugs~ He´s far gone... Next is the last part? :(
Catseye*Rose 2008-07-14 ch 3,	abuseI'm still hugely impressed with the colour thing. You just do it so well! The whole chapter I was screaming "No!" in my head. Those two are on a very slippery slope (well, mostly Greg). But, y'know, despite the drugs, FINALLY they've made progress with each other! So, yay! But Kandi's a jerk. Although I guess he kinda deserves it...but still. Don't really like her. And Jude...he tries to do the right thing, but he has to stop letting Greg near the drugs! It's going to end badly! ...like the last bit of the chapter. That sucks! Maybe he should carry around a taser... Oh, he's gonna need a lot of hugs from Jude... This is probably going to lead to more drugs, isn't it? Sigh I can't even begin to guess what's going to happen next chapter!
Love Eternally 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abuseOh wow. I just want to give him a hug, and perhaps a rehab clinic. But the hug first.
gothicHobbit08 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abuseWhat do you mean, that your characterization has gone to hell? What did you have in mind? And no matter how this story may not be what you expected to come up with, it has put you on my favorite authors list... your writing is amazing. So I don't know what you had in mind for this story, or how you've digressed from what you meant for it to be, but it hasn't gone to hell. Maybe, if it's not what you meant to write, you should reconsider where the plot is going to go from here. If you're comfortable with doing so, completely disregard what you had in mind before, and dream up what's going to happen next, given the circumstances. Come up with an ending that fits with what's already happened, and keep writing. But I'd like to see more chapters.
just give me november 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abusethis is cool.
Chasmodai Blue 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abuseI'm not afraid of anything! except zombies. And with that, man invented the crowbar. glumglum
Irony's.Last.Words.Were 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abuselol, you're not scaring away all reviewers. i think you should keep going. I just wish Greg would grow some balls and tell Jude what's really bugging him, but I suppose that the fact he keeps it to himself is what keeps the plot going, yeah? =] And your characterization isn't getting bad. You're actually better than most authors on here with characterization, so quite putting yourself down! goodness. lol. Good job, keep going! Always, Irony
magalina 2008-05-06 ch 2,	abuseoh, no... This is really depressing D: I feel bad for both of them. Jude (love that name) is in the same situation that Greg, I think. About the kisses. I hate how Greg feels about everything ;__; Love this :):)
Amindaya 2008-04-30 ch 2,	abuseNope, uphill all the way! More please.
Amindaya 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseWhoa, heroin is heavy. I like this story. I'm glad it's a four-shot because I'm excited about seeing it fleshed out.
Let. Me. Fly. 2008-04-14 ch 2,	abuseWoah! That's rad, fly, hip to the jive, cool groovy kats. I'm interested in what you can do for orange- my favourite colour. I suggest you give somebody a really bad fake tan, or make somebody accidentally walk into Lindsay Lohan. =)
Chasmodai Blue 2008-04-13 ch 2,	abusew00t! You make me very happy and I love you a lot.
Broken Bright Eyes 2008-04-13 ch 2,	abuseI like it.. But wait..is this the end? Like.. THE END? Well..I mean.. I guess.. They're together no? I thought it would be a little longer.. Actually get to Red.. Or something.. Either way, I like it.
Love Eternally 2008-04-12 ch 2,	abuseGreg seems like he's on acid, even without the drugs.

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