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| calendar girl 2008-07-30 ch 1,  | abusei really like this one, from you, mostly because of this stanza: "i am young and i am dumb and in love with the world." it's really great. |
| paris is burning 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseoh, gosh, what i wouldn`t give to know you. i adore your style, and your imagery, just ... really great. the ending was probably my favorite, but the whole thing was just excellent. i know this isn`t helping you any, so i apologize in advance. i do believe i`d have more to say if it weren`t so early/late, but i just want you to know now that this is excellent. thank you. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusereally amazing images here... in the beginning with what you would do and the fish simile... really beautiful.. I also love the repetition... wonderful piece PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
| Julius Gillian 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseGalapagos, If you're an intellectual and a poet, as well as a hopeless romantic, then you've created my life history in this succinct poem. I feel you man, write on, - Julian |