love the story please update soon

Ahh, thank you SO MUCH! :D
and I'm really really sorry I didn't review as soon as I read it, I was going to but for some reason FP wouldn't let the review go through? (same problem with messaging..I don't know why!)
Anyways, I love this chapter, although I miss Charis :( But Kade is awesome as always ;)

Awesome. I love Kade, and it's good to hear that his mother is still alive. At least I think it's good... :) I assume this means he'll be going to look for her?

Good chapter. Kind of scary. I can't wait to read more. :)

LoL forgot to logg on ...woops :p

I've just read all the chapters from the start till now and it's bloody brilliant ! :D I love it, I love it and I don't find it confusing at all, I can't wait for the next chapter UPDATE SOON PLLEEAASE!! :P

I'm really liking this story and I'm surprised it's never caught my attention before because I read your other stuff on my other account. The fact that I'm still reading it says something too because usually I'm not a big fan of ANY supernatural stuff. I really like the thinking you put behind some of the ideas, like about the Fallen and werewolves, whether it's from research or not.

One of the BEST stories on here! I love it!

oh this is a brilliant story!! I can't wait for more, his mum's alive?!?! awesome! cya next time ~ Alenor

this was really good. I'm glad you finally updated. I am confused, as you said, but like any good plot, the reader must be confused at some point, that way they keep reading trying to find out more! I can't wait to read more
~Mel

Great chapter. I loved it. The scene in the forest was so sweet. :) And MacKenzie was... hm. Interesting. :D

My exams went fine, thanks. :) And yeah, summer holiday was great. I went to visit friends in Cardiff, Lancaster, and York, and went up to Edinburgh on a day trip as well, so that was nice too. :) Oh, by the way - do they really produce rice and corn on Skye? I mean, rice at least demands a *lot* of water to grow in (have you seen pictures of the Chinese rice fields?)... Ah well. Just a small thing. I'm not even entirely sure myself.

Can't wait to read more! :)

whoa, I only just discovered this new chapter! XD It was worth the wait!! Btw, I am ValiantLucy who reviewed some of the previous chapters...I just changed my penname.

Hello! I'm Lena Carmona. I'm a judge for the Fiction Press Supernatural Awards. My category is Most original. Some one, or maybe even you, nominated this story. I just got through reading it and I wanted to tell you that you've done a fantastic job. In the ten chapters, I found a total of eight mistakes, but, hey, that's way less than me.
If you have any questions, you can email me or PM me.
Great job!
-Lena Carmona

very nice

this chapter was amazing. Yeah I love the random talks we have too! lol. They're all dorks, i love it. It's just a matter of who's the coolest dork. (prolly Jon Stewart lol)
~Mel