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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseI love the line in brackets. Very moving. |
| Thenardier 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good choice on wording, makes this flow beautifully. |
| Basara 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusea hell inside wishing to purify the soul in the mystical fire (rebirth purposes...a new age idealism)... or the an oriental idea when going to the last stages of his (no women allowed;not meaning to be a sexist ok?)life... to become deviod of one's existence... nice... |
| xDancingintheRainx 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseVery intriguing. Its kind of difficult to grasp the full meaning, but I like pieces like that. It adds a certain mystery and its very thought provoking. Nicely done. Thanks for the review! :) |
| perpetual questions 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseVery thought-provoking, I like the way you formatted it. Great intriguing haiku. |
| Kyllorac 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm not really sure what to think about this piece (it's so brief). I must say, though, that you made interesting use of punctuation and typestyles. This poem has me thinking, trying to decipher its meaning. Very few poems have managed to do that, so kudos to you. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the use of colons and semicolons and and the bolding and italicizing... it's really fitting... I also love the phrase "mystical fire" Thanks for the review! |
| Ygg 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow very mysterious and spiritual! I love the nebulous wording and also the format. Great work! |