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| Tytherpol 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseit's really something a lot of people who try to write can relate to but it's also a really honest statement about human passion "because boredom beats paranoia now doesn't it?"-insanely awesome. killer piece |
| Iris Early 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseperfect. so, so perfect. i, just. yes. |
| for the hell of it 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusewas wondering when you'd run out of obscure references. it makes a refreshing change, almost like you're no longer hiding behind them. it made this seem more potent somehow. like being there, as opposed to it being described. i gotta say, this is powerful stuff. can't wait for more. |