Reviews for Because She Loves Me

Julius Gillian
2008-03-08
ch 1,

abuseThis poem is so fragile, if I wasn't in a very calm mood I think I would have cried. It's very emotional felt, at least it did stir me and I felt slightly depressed and longing inside it.

This is wonderful.

The only thing I'd change is this line:

'And I close my eyes; close my hand, close heart'

I'd write close my heart, because it seems to flow with the whole poem. See for yourself.

Wonderful again, keep it up.

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