Reviews for Source of Uninspiration

Gemma Lovell
2008-03-08
ch 1,

abuseGood way to express the frustration of writer's block. I agree with you, it's not your best work, but it could be worse. Good job, all the same!!
Love, Gem

Tranquil Thorns
2008-03-08
ch 1,

abuseI can relate to this right now! I have an idea I really want to write about, but my brain refuses to work.

I loved the lines 'I want to hear my song tonight/But my fingers bleed on the strings'. It's a stunning depiction. (: The last line is absolutely beautiful, too.

I noticed a few mistakes here and there, so I'll point them out to you. 'My actions winds up' should be 'wind up'; 'so thorough filled' should be 'thoroughly filled'; 'dreams which doesn't' should be 'dreams that don't.'

Also, 'And write my words without contrite' sounds awkward. Did you mean 'contriteness'? Because you need a noun there instead of an adjective. =P

Good luck being inspired!

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