an alternative is using a good branded glue to fix it up... lol... close relationship with a person is the fixer of most problems...

nice...

your summary made me laugh, so I just had to read the poem :)

'torn paper heart'- beautiful line!

I really liked this haiku :) it seems so simple... but true.

Imagery used here is splendid. The ambiguity present helps make this a more delightful haiku, even though the title aims to reveal more.

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I like the image that is portrayed in the line, "this torn paper heart..." It seems so fragile and distant. For a first haiku, this is very beautiful. Great job.

-C.N

I love the image of the paper heart, but it seemed like some words like "no, nothing" and the a in the last line were just there to make the right syllables... but it's still really awesome for your first haiku

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Very pretty! D

It's simple, efficient, and meaningful. I have really nothing to critique - I just wanted to say I like this a lot.

And is this a dog we're talking about? P