OI!! STOP BEING EMO!

*sigh* I miss that school stress...For some reason, I hate not going to school...T_T O.O

But, I'm happy not going to school too...I'm confusing...@.@ LOL

Loves Ya,
BFF

This is really sweet, angsty, but sweet. It seems like you sort of found a happy medium between a super poetic poem and a prose poem, it is a really interesting style.

Some of the poem doesn't flow- you might want to read it out loud and just see where the beat is off.

Other than that, I like it.

Especially the last three lines- I really loved them.