I really liked this chapter, even though it was short. Good job :)

Aw, that was so sad. D:

I wish they had just run when they could. It probably would've been better if they had been hit on the side instead of head on, but that's just being realistic. XD

Anyways, good chapter. I didn't really notice any typos except one: 'caring the drunken driver' probably should have been 'carrying the drunken driver'.

But other than that good job.
Update soon~

--Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward

Aw. Trevor seems so adorable.

Oh no! That's so sad... I'm all depressed now. Awesome word choice.

Like this so far...keep it up =]

I love stories like this.

I really like this... can't wait to read more :)