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Astrum Viscus
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you word things.
It's so different and yet well done.
"And crumpled jeans on the floor,
Blinds pointlessly open
An attempt at achieving depth you justify
(When the real question is where is that sock?)"
This part is my favorite.
I can relate.
:]
woot no login
2008-03-12
ch 1, anon.
abusethis one's my favourite so far
(and you know who i am... the one too lazy to log in...although in the time i took to write that i probably could have signed in and given you a signed review :) )
Twilight Starr
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI love the "rocky sunset" part. Romantic is definitely overused (yet I still use it). Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
jemehe
2008-03-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseI think it is beautiful, I think is wonderful, but I dont understand it. I am immune to the world of poetry my friend. It is a concept I cannot grasp, a type of fruit with some exotic fibre/omega polyunsaturate I cannot digest, an object which no matter how hard I squint with my biologically inferior eyes, I cannot see clearly. Get the point? Write a story sometime, an article?

And thank you I will find my own cobwebs.
fatbird33
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusei must say that this was quite ranodm and the title confused me, maybe i'm just stupid. i did like that parantheses bit.

YAY review marathon!
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