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| LucyDoll 2008-06-11 ch 19, | abuseOH MY GOD! I can't believe it's over! Will there be a sequel? Does she ever hook up with Tyler? Does Alex really admit to being gay? Does her mother live? Does David forgive her for "killing" him? Are you going to respond to all that by saying "We'll see", like you finished it? Gah. Again, this story was amazing. Possibly one of your best. |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-11 ch 18, | abuseNO! WHY MUST SAM DIE?!?! WHY?!?!?! You know you're reading a good story when you bawl like a baby when a character dies. |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-10 ch 17, | abuseYou have no idea how much I love you right now. Seriously, I want to be the mother of your children. O_o Creepy, huh? But seriously, I just finished chatper 16, then BAM! here's 17! It's fablous! And even though Sam's a montser...I miss him! |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-10 ch 16, | abuseOh...my...god. I DON'T LIKE THIS CLIFHANGER! Agh! But I absolutely loved the update :) |
| LucyDoll 2008-06-05 ch 15, | abuseHi! I just wanted to say "Holy Freakin' Crap!" Your story is freaking amazing and it makes me want to sing silly songs...even though it's a dark and creepy story. Maybe that's why I have to cheer myself up. Hm. Anywho, this has to be one of the best vampire/demon stories I've read in a long time. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Well Dang 2008-05-18 ch 14, anon. | abuseWow. Again, just wow. I don't know what else to say about all of this. Except WHY DOES ALEX HAVE TO BE GAY?!?!?! And what about his girlfriend? Does she know?...wait why would she know...nevermind. |
| I thought that I should say 2008-05-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseUh, omg. That was just...wow. And seriously, it's been FOREVER since you updated. Good luck on all your AP tests too. I remember that they were a **. Hahaha. Anywho I can't wait for the next update. |
| We're not going to live for... 2008-04-27 ch 12, anon. | abuseOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! IS HE A DEMON? Cause he can't be a vamp. Although that would add to his Super Duper Yummyfull-ness. And gah! you seriously need to update. Because I'm going crazy...even though it's been less than two minutes since I finished the chapter. |
| I loved you with a fire red 2008-04-27 ch 11, anon. | abuseSo holy shity! This was intense! Yay! But urgh. Clem is upsetting me. She's being stupid! And okay I can't wait to see what's going to happen now. But um...ouch. She must be in serious pain. |
| It's Just A Thought 2008-04-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseAnother slow chapter but good. Hm, I'm starting to think that Sam is 'he montser' but he's too cute/I like him too much. So I'm hoping it's either Tyler or Tatsu. Or maybe Firefly. Endless possiblities. |
| Like You'll Never See Me Ag... 2008-04-27 ch 9, anon. | abuseSemi-boring chapter. But I know you're just building up to something super big. Plus if it was all scary stuff I'd have MAJOR nightmares. So this is all good. |
| Hold You In My Arms 2008-04-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseBoo! Yeah, scary. Guess what! I totally screamed when she found her mom. Then that creepy black thing came out, creepier! Dude how do you right this?! Wait, I shouldn't ask that cause I right gross stuff too. Haha. Hmm it's getting really interesting. |
| Free Fallin' 2008-04-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseSo, holy crap. That was super intense. And now I'm listening to Free Fallin' and I can't stop. Hahaha. So I'm guess that the fact that Taylor is a fast healer is important. And the bathroom since is super creepy. Oh you can't get stiches wet at all. So you might want to have her wrap her foot up more or something. At least I'm 99.99% positive that that's true. I know you can't get a cast wet. Hmm, I'll look that up for you. |
| Lonely Loser 2008-04-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseHoly **. That's all I have to say about this chapter. |
| I'm The Queen Of Babble 2008-04-27 ch 5, anon. | abuseOMG! So now I totally like Chuck (not her name but yeah. She's alive!) and everyone else is also totaly awesome. Like Alex. Super Duper Yummyfull now. And okay since you stopped at that totally shocking point I'm going to go read some more. |