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| Oracle of Destiny 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseHmm...this is all very true. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the questions... and how you intersperse them with statements.. and I really like the ending although I think said should be say since the other line is in present tense... I also like the line "the opinions of others speak louder than facts" it's really insightful PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
| partbritishtowhead 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow I really liked that. My favorite line was: "Wandering the streets is better than directions, Because no one can trust what they say." Keep up the goodness :) |