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| Violent Messiah 2008-06-17 ch 3,  | abuseThe story idea is unusual, not your normal zombie/infected stuff, and that's good. However, you really need to either clean it up or let someone else edit it for you. Story has promise, its just too rough as is with all the mistakes...clean it up and you might just have something. By the way...I dig the title! -=x |
| marie ryan 2008-06-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseThere are a lot of spelling errors. 8 on the first page alone. Saterday--Saturday, luandry-laundry, sterted-started, imediently-immediately, etc. |
| AliceInNetherland 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuselol this is funny i dont if you intended it to be, but i found it hilarious. its a good story, i suck at grammer and spelling so dont worry about the mistakes, i probaly wont notice them anyway. =^.^= |