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| Beautiful Pixie 2008-07-22 ch 9, | abuseThis is absolutely the best. I cannot wait for the next chapters to come out. I have spent 2 full days reading book I & II |
| listentoher 2008-07-20 ch 9, | abuseI read Or So the Story Goes and the first Kiss of Twilight in 24 hours. I'm so tired from lack of sleep, but I couldn't help but read the whole story. It's so addictive. Vinny is my favorite character even though he's a little stuck-up. He's such a dear! I'm also a Lily fan. Even though she's ten, do you think she would fall in love with any of the other characters in the future? |
| Written 2008-07-20 ch 9, | abuseD: Now I'm wondering when she'll get pregnant. I just got back from vacation, so maybe I used to know but I need to ask. before she falls asleep, during (like in the fairytale and really creeptastic), or after? as usual, FANTASTIC chemistry. seriously... just oozing with it. sorry I haven't been around to review in a while :) I'm sure you had plenty of other readers though so not too worried. if only I had a scanner! I'd totally send art. oh well, maybe someday. in the meantime, thanks for the chapter and keep up the awesome work. |
| Kar3b3ar 2008-07-15 ch 9, | abusethere's been chemistry between them since your first story. i LOVE reading this. it reminds me of a fairytale story made for teens or adults, really thank you so much for coming up with this idea, its amazing! |
| K.B. and C.B. 2008-07-09 ch 9, | abuseAck! I missed FOUR whole chapters!? I'm a bad fan. ='[ Sorry for not updating on the last three! I loved this chapter! Fixing her necklace means Vinny really does care for Helena...right? I see Melina's constantly trying to interfere with confessions and lovey-stuff between the two. XD Please, please, please update soon! I really hope I don't miss the next update agina. XD -K.B. |
| SpontaneousSilhouette 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuseHey, I just finished reading Or So the Story Goes and both of the Kiss of Twilight books (or as much as there is) and I loved them. Vinny is fantastic! I was wonderign if I could make picture for the Kiss of Twilight books on photoshop using actors/models, instead of drawing something. Would that be okay, or would you rather not put an actual face to any of your charaters? |
| Bookstalker 2008-07-07 ch 9, | abuseAw... that was so sweet! Poor Vinny! =) and Elsa must be OLD... =) I loved the last bit too! Helena's so innocent, it's hard to believe that she could seduce Vinny. Hehe Where is the whole story set? Is it in a parallel world? Because there's no such thing as Exultia, is there... but how come Greece and Troy are there too? Sorry |
| obsessive reader 2008-07-07 ch 9, anon. | abuseyou said you'd update this week...*dramatic pause* and you DIDN'T! pretty please post the next chapters soon! i dunno how i shall persevere till then...the sizzling chemistry and the cliffhangy last line keep me on my toes |
| sammy 2008-07-06 ch 9, anon. | abusehahaha helena should seduce francis or robert as a wake-up call for vincent to be more sensitive XD |
| madeleine 2008-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseon a scale of 1 to 10, your story is 11. it's addictive! i'm half in love with vincent already, and you've characterized helena through her childhood years amazingly--she's endearingly trusting, "not sharp" (vincent's words, not mine), and caring. please update soon! |
| Racquet 2008-07-04 ch 9, | abuseElsa's like a hidden crack addict, but I do like her rather much. "Seduce him"-- well that's a thing that Hell would be good at. Chemistry? Don't worry, it was fine and you still had the Vinster stay in character. Hm... Who's my favorite character (from an earlier chapter)... I like many different characters for many different reasons. I like Lily (because of her strength, endurance and leadership qualities-- she's a very good "little sister" character and she doesn't hesitate to speak her mind). I like Eve to an extent (she becomes more forward with each passing day, but we don't see as much of at times). I love Vinster and Hell as well, they are both permanently(sp) flawed, but it just makes them very human. (those would be my favorties(sp) then!) OH! And I gots a question: Do you know of any fantasy stories that are told in first person POV that is based of a the main characters needing to go on a quest and they are in a little group that always fights the odds (A one remincing of Deltora Quest if you've ever read that series-- I read them years and years ago (childrens books)). Well-- update soon! I love this story! (Odd, I'm actually going to story alert this and keep it on story alert!) ~Racquet |
| aferdeity 2008-06-30 ch 9, | abuseWell that was quite amazing the emotinal turmoil that you put into each chapter always akes me gush. Your an aazing writer and yes there was a lot of chemistry. Update very very soon! |
| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-06-30 ch 9, | abuseAH! -falls over- totally smooth way to confess your love to someone. well, i'm glad helena's been given good advice by elsa :] i was holding my breath to see when she'd be like "AND I HAVE REPORTED YOU TO THE QUEEN" but it never came, so i'm glad... i felt you pulled this transition off very nicely :] can't wait for your next update! |
| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-06-30 ch 8, | abusehaha, i'm ruffling my feathers like a peacock. thanks for dedicating the chapters to me (glad to know you got the pictures! :D). i'm loving these updates, too... hehe. i can't help but love helena xD something about her makes me so proud that she captures vincent's eyes and holds his hand (so sweet! reminds me of my own boyfriend :]). these couple of chapters have made me go "aw!" |
| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-06-29 ch 7, | abusedude, i haven't checked this story for updates! ah! but i'm glad that you updated so much! :] aww... lily and francis, hehe. i always like the way you set up the scenes, it's always so easy to picture the characters. |