Wow! Three chapters in 24 hours! I LOVE IT! The beginning of chapter 19 was very well written I love mushy stuff. I am getting kind of aggrivated at Vinny JUST TELL HER THE TRUTH ALREADY! I guess this says a lot about Helena though. If it were me and I loved someone like Vinny I would go insane!

Anyway, I did have a question to ask you how old are the characters now? I know it's been a couple of years since the beginning right? Or am I confused? Well awesome job on the chapters! They were both amazing!

You've delivered quite nicely yet again. :P So, is Ziggy a soon-to-be main character or some guy who'll just show up a few times but has a drastic effect on the story?

I love how your story is going! :D

It makes me wonder if Helena is willing to give up having her legs changed for Vinny.

Question, would Lily fall for Chris? Haha! Her interest just made me think. :P

Yeah, I haven't been able to review for quite some time. :( Sorry. :

Anyway, thanks for the updates! ;)

I love the Vinny-Helena chemistry, right now. :D

But omg, what's Helena going to choose! I don't want Vinny marrying someone else... and who's this Ziggy person?

Anyway.

I'm really, really, really psyched that you updated THREE times! Completely made my day so much better.

I am interested to see how the gun plays a role in the story or if it was just a filler. Is Helena really just going to give up her quest?

YAY!

i didn't think you'd update so soon but i'm so glad :D

chapter 20 was my fav out of these two. i love the lovey-dovey moments Helena and Vinny share... especially when Vin lets his guard down. i don't see how blind Helena can be. it's obvious that Vincent loves her and that he wants to spend the rest of his life with her but he doesn't say it. he lies to her all the time and she just accepts it... although everyone else knows that he truly does love her.

it's amazing how quickly Vincent can change from being the guy you want to drool over and make your own to the cold, arrogant ass you'd love to kick lol he makes me angry sometimes how one second he's perfect and the next he's... well he's still perfect (this is vincent we're talking about :P) but he's a complete "i'm a royal and i can do what i want when i want and to whom i want" it's infuriating lol

Ziggy seems like an interesting character :P

i guess Lily can be useful hehe that bit was good :D

i can't wait for more!

Erika.

Thanks for the double (almost triple!) update; it made my bad day better. I don't quite understand Vinny; it's like he won't let himself be happy. Great job and Ziggy's definitely an interesting character!

I totally didn't see that coming! Great twist. Now I'm going to go read chapter 20; I'm thrilled it's already up!

woow

Every time I read a new chapter I run through a slew of emotions. I love Helena, but her childishness can be grating. However, Vinny I have a much more volatile love/hate relationship with. His reactions don't seem to ever be warranted because they are always so extreme. I love how intense he is, though. Thanks for the update!

Heya. I always forget to review...but here i am!

Again, amazing work as always! I loved it. Yes, I heard about the plagiarism among many authors on the FP.

I've joined a LJ community and everything to continue reading their work- so if that happens to you- please let me know. I love your stories.

And, i have a question. Why is Vincent in denial? I mean, what's wrong with him liking her? Nothing!

I love Helena!

I tend to fall in love with characters who have flaws/insecurities/vulnerabilities. I don't think Helena is a Mary-Sue at all. There are some very distinct characters flaws about her. And I love that about her. Of course, she does annoying things from time to time. She's very childish and vain. At the same time, it's why I like her. I like imperfect characters.

Yeah it has definetly been a while, but it is understandible with your sister and all. You must be having to comfort her. Well i really liked ths chapter bc of all the helen vin scenes. I cannot wait for the rest!

How much longer will it take for Helena to become the most beloved in the lands? Sorry I am just getting anxious to find out.

I loved it! This chapter is so...sensual I guess I could say. I guess back in those days (I'm assuming the story takes place "back in those days") it was horrible for a man to undo a woman's dress without being married, probably even when they are married, but anyway...when Vinny did that I gasped in shock! Seriously my co-workers were like "What's wrong?"

I love the chapter and the update didn't take that long, can't wait for the next one!