hey man ural,ost there. great chapter. very very imaginative. u shud get ur works published

“Call of Squad 8, we don’t have that kind of time.”

Error, error. flawed typing -D

aw. you dick, oh well i thik i have the fitting ending in my brain. and yes...i will check out your new story, damn i still have to write fucking brutal diplomacy though, eh, oh well

This really sucks! I FORGOT WHERE I LEFT OFF!

hye, so this is the second to last chapter? no! oh well, i know that the next chapter is going to have some major ass kicking to the extreme. i can't wait for it, and this was a really awesome story. can't wait to read what's next.

dang, this story is coming to a exiting climax, i really hope to see another chapter soon. im in north carolina until saturday, so i wont be able to update until i get back, but when i do i shall update, but nice chapter and i really want to see the big fight! anyways, once im done with h&gok i will start to write brutal diplomacy, i have to admit, i dont know where that story is headed yet.

haly crap, only like six more chapters. is there gonna be some bigass fight? dude, i need more!

yah, this was good, keep it up. nice battle sequence and i will look forward to the chapters to come. oh and ill probably update today.

pretty fricken good. u are good at fighting scenes. well im gonna try to update sometime today or tomorrow

wait, which part of the conversation should i be confused about. im confused about not being confused! well, still, it was a good chapter. how did it feel wrong?

Wow, another awesome chapter. Really, this one was just breathtaking, from the revelations, to the chase, to the cliffhanger, just wonderful! I loved it! I wonder who the new character is, and i can't wait to see more of the Blood Clan member.

P.s. I knew they'd run into some sort of monster. I'll bet he's an expirement gone wrong too huh? Well, i guess i'll find out later. Update soon!

Damn, this is so cool! I used to think the PARIAH were kind of lame, but now they're pretty much the coolest organization i've ever read about. Well, i can already tell they're going to be running into some deranged test subject somehow, so i can't wait.

You know, i really do love this story. Its probably the best i've read on Fictionpress. Well then, this was another great chapter. I'm pretty much hooked, and the Blood Clan is cool, i wish you'd elaborated a bit more on that.

Oh dude! I'm so glad you updated! And this is so awesome! Great job! I love the four new characters, they're all pretty cool. And even though i can already tell the Blood Clan dude is gonna be a bad guy, i think he's pretty awesome.

i hate you, how dare you leave us with this. update son, i am really getting hooked now