I love the new perspective! Great job!

Shocking ending, good for the a/n...I was tempted to leave the story as it was because I saw his death and was extremely put out. Heh. The story seems thorough and extremely well done with such a brusque character. keep it up

what people forget is that people can die and then be brought back to life

I'm much liking. Thank you for updating.

Great job. I was so glad to see this had been updated! Keep it up and update soon (:
Faith

...that last line really got me. D:

yay! i've been waiting for you to post more of this :D
OMG! i love that last bit too! the way it's phrased really tickles my fancy :P
can't wait for more!

Erika

Interesting... Hopefully there's more. Can't wait to read on!

Woot! Woot! I love all the stories et in this land... btw, when will you update Kiss of Twilight: The Absence of Light?? Please hurry, i cant find anything else that holds my attention
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I think it's so cool how all of your characters are interconnected with each other. You've really built up an incredibly complicated universe, and I'm very interested to see the part that Lycan is going to play and how it fits into Kiss of Twilight...

The beginning struck me as just a little choppy - you repeat "breathing" twice in the same paragraph, which threw me off. After the first couple paragraphs though, I was hooked.

o i like! though i am wondering when you will update soon! :D i think this story intriques me the most, i LOVE the name. CONTINUE! i will be waiting with bated breath!

Shayla
aka, MirrorMirror

Every time I see the name Lycan, I think of lycantropy... word associations, bah.

good start; can't wait to see more :)

Coolio! We get to have a look at luycan's story. Can't wait till your next up date!

hello, i enjoy your stories, but i must admit there a bit slow paced, with little romance, i think its somthing you could improve on, by putting more chemistry in your stories, and not dragging it out

hmm
nice