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| Lindsey 2008-08-27 ch 4, anon. | abusei feel like i was there. still. i feel like im watching it all happen. its a another amazing chapter. keep up the work! ^^ |
| LIndsey 2008-08-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseAnother Great Chapter. :D still feels like im liveing in the story. |
| Lindsey 2008-08-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis Is Another Amazing Chapter. Your A Truely Amazing Writer. |
| Lindsey 2008-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis chapter is really good. it felt like i was actully there. and seeing it all happen. its really amazing. |
| MegTheStrange 2008-05-05 ch 5, | abuseI really like your story so far. Lillians emotions are so real. Please continiue writing this story |
| Lady Saphira 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseWow this is amazing, I can't wait for more. My only suggestion is that you might want to spread out your character descriptions ever so slightly, it would add more interest that way, I think, and take away the slight feeling that one is reading a character profile. Other than that excellent work. This is definitely my kind of story. Lady Saphira |
| Cass Boothe 2008-03-08 ch 3, | abuseI'd bet Allen's parents are dead. |