Reviews for From Childrens' Eyes

simpleplan13 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseThe media wanting to get feed... fed The world is burning to the ground.. matchbox20 song reference or a coincidence? I like the the rhyming and the description of the corruption, but the children's thing.. yes its true the world will be there, but I think yea teens maybe should have a say but children are really too young to understand the issues... anyhow still a great piece witha really great message at the end PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
FellowMan 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseYou mean "fed" instead of "feed" right? :) Anywho, I liked this, it's good to make people open up their eyes and really look around them--goodjob ! h.a.g.d !
123454321 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseAt first glance, your rhyming is fairly consistent (I assume the second line should end in 'fed'). Two lines that seemed to stop the flow in its tracks were 'But nobody things to ask us so-/-how can we make an impact on,' I reread those lines about 5 times before moving on to finish the piece. Occasionally you have grammatical errors such as using 'worlds' instead of 'world's'. -J.A. Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).