 123454321 2008-03-08 . chapter 1I assume this is a song and will base review on this fact.
It seems a little short-worded to be a song, maybe giving it more body? Also, you ended many lines with the word 'you' and it makes it sound repetitive.
The changing of the wording of the chorus in the bridge is a classic move, but works here very well.
-J.A.
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