wow..so twisted!..i like it and i hate it?..hurm..kinda cant decide now..but its a one hell of a very good story !

That was really a twist that I didn't see it coming, it totally took me by surprise. I have to say your writing has an edge, some sort of rawness that make your characters seem more real, that gives them more of depth and the fact that you are not afraid to put your main character into some big shit, to show your readers the ugly side of him, the strong structure of the story and your ability to transform one-shot into a story that gets you thinking are telling that you are a great writer whose skill will with practice and time just shine more brightly.

oO;; Scuff is mean. He could've left whenever couldn't he? xD

Does he get to keep the house?

o-o -drool- i dont even like furrys

I liked this. It had a nice sense of finality that most one-shots lack, so I don't feel the urge to ask you to turn it into a novel. It's good as is.

The only problem I can find is that I didn't know Scuff was a kitsune until the shower thing. But maybe I just didn't read it close enough? I don't know...

Anyway, on to the next story! Or one of the ones I skipped in favour of a one-shot! Lol.

♥ - Luci.

this was pretty good :) definitaly a one shot yeah but I loiced it haha and it's good that you're practicing your smut skills muahahaha :P

--Alex

Wow.

.__. That was hot. Really hot. It was more a bondage situation...except no rope.

I love it.