wow, that was really sad. but you kinda killed the mood a little with the: "Mwhahaha" in the middle but all-and-all it wasn't too bad.

it was okae. I mean, you are like, 13 rite? you don noe yet how to right good. No, you can't right like Sndra yet, but your alwrite. DOn let tis discurage you thought. You still gewd.

What the hell? That was the crappiest form of story I have ever read! There is no way in h-e- double hockey sticks that that piece of doggy do-do can EVER be compared to Sandra Cisneros! Your friends are either seriously disturbed, or are just very supportive of their seriously disturbed friend.