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| Tytherpol 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseit really is great to be able to be pretty much anonymous with things like fictionpress or whatever so you can share the things inside of you and just let them out without fear of being judged by real people you care about or anything this is wonderfully written. the imagery and emotions are startling honest by far my favorite part: "We’re going somewhere. We get there." |
| Emma the Paradox 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuse"I’m still shivering, but her arms are tight around me and she’s warm." Beautiful! I love this kind of writing. Simple, sharp, and powerful. You paint a wonderfully heartbreaking picture. And just so you know, I believe you can be "fixed." |