Sorry.

I didn't mean to not look at my card hand and see a Queen, and not a King.
I wish I never even played the card game.

I know we need to find a new deck of cards, but perhaps we can just play at near card tables?

I know, I'll probably be the one closest to the bar.

But if you ever need a card or two...

you can always talk to me.

I like this.. the beginning starts out so sweet and then slowly it sort of denigrates not the piece, but the relationship... I also like the flow.. it's really nice.. one thing the car-house image was nice, but I got confused because it sounded like the house of cards was in your hands, which seemed odd... but other than that it was really great

PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)

oh my god, this is really touching. and sad. and yeah tragic :(

I loved the way you mentioned cards. nice piece.