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| loves him 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseThat was absolutely adorable. I loved the banter between them and the repetition of their conversation. One thing though: "He smirked. “Why not? It’s a free country, after all, isn’t it?” He asked, throwing my previous works back at me. I rolled my eyes." I think it should be 'words' instead of 'works'. Other than that, great oneshot! |
| gum is yum 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute! I actually laughed at some of the parts. I love goofy/silly people, and this one-shot had two. :) |
| Hyperroll 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abusewell written, original, adorable, and lovely. nice work, added to favs. |
| opposites-can-and-WILL-attr... 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseGah! I was nearly run over a bike too! Except there was no cute crush to pull me out of the way and I just jumped back when it was right in front of me and sprained my ankle...so yeah... A really good story ,overall 5 stars! :) |
| glamoureste 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseAW...! Oh my goodness.. AW that is so cute. i think the whole "sex god" thing was brilliant. my favorite line was the one where she was like, "aphrodite and apollo are kinda related." hahaha... but super cute story!! :] |
| d666lisa 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI adore this story, it's very well written and extremely cute :) |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseFrom what I know Apollo is the god of music and the sun. Both of them have the same father, Zeus, too. So maybe none of them is a greek sex god put phew- who cares? Very sweet & funny! |
| beeyouteefull 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseSweet, wonderful, perfect! Just the right amount of romance and humor! Now I'm going to go spin around crazily on beautiful spring days and hope that it works for me! |
| anitsirK 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was cute. :) Short and sweet... Exactly what people need to brighten up sad days. Hahahaha... |
| x3life 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute!! |
| starlit x sky 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazing! I laughed so hard at the whole "tree" and "bike" thing. I loved it! |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAww, I loved it, faves! |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseHahaha. Crashing into things is something I'm quite good at. XD So I can understand this bunch of crashing-ness. Creative/original, cute/fluffy, and cliche (really really cliche), but well-written so that I don't mind at all, in fact, I love it all. (: I do kinda like the surprise "oh-I-like-you-too" at the end, and the comparisons to Greek gods are quite fun. (: Love, love, love. Love xoxluurve for adding it to our c2 and you of course for writing it. (: |
| woodstock1969 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so adorable! I absolutely loved it! |
| notebaggage 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! The "cliche" line made me squeal outright. I'm serious. SO. CUTE. And much to my very, VERY pleasant surprise, this story didn't end all cringy and clichey! Sure, they ended up together, but you made it so that it didn't seem sappy at all. Just very adorable. |