Reviews for My Memory Is Dying

Ygg 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseLove the alliterations and the tragic sense of inevitability in this poem. Keep up the good work!
xxopticaldelusions 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseGood job on this -- I always envy people who can write good haikus! I love the imagery here. Thanks for reviewing.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseNice expressions here! It's a powerful piece for a haiku. It puts me in a mindset of winter and forgetfulness, which shows that you hit the mark. =P
123454321 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseGood imagery and word usage. Your word choices were very concise; bravo. After 'snow' do you need the colon? It looks funny, but I'm not sure what kind of pause you were looking for. -J.A. Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).