Reviews for Ookami's Samurais

Reviews For: Ookami's Samurais

Kingdom Come 2008-04-05 ch 5,	abuseSo sorry it took so long to put in my two cents. I've been a little busying working on some of my own projects. The fourth chapter took an interesting twist. Somehow being transported to England! That was something I didn't expect and that a good thing, keep me guessing. The comfrontation with the ninjas in the fifth chapter was really good. The idea with the wires to make them seem more supernatural was smart, and true to their nature. Do keep this story up, I am curious to see were it goes and thankful that it looks to be a lot more than your typical samurai drama.
Sabio Cigaro 2008-03-17 ch 4,	abuseThats right, they didn't. Dont you think its cool for samurais to be shooting and cutting?? >:D
gunslingery 2008-03-17 ch 4,	abuseThis is another good chapter but i thought samurais didnt use guns and i got confused at the part when they went into their minds and it came out to be real other than that good job.
Sabio Cigaro 2008-03-14 ch 3,	abusethanks so much. It's okay if you're honest. I take no critisism personally! I'm very thankful for your reviews towards the story!
Kingdom Come 2008-03-14 ch 3,	abuseExcellant, your story is evolving nicely. I enjoy your fast pace and I can see your imagination coming through in story. Your liking for this type of genre is quite evident. Swords, Samurai, Ninjas and a mysterious blind man are all quite compelling. However, and I mean this with respect, I felt the story jumped a bit, or skipped over a few details that would of made the story flow more evenly. This is nothing to worry about. Getting the story down is the most important part, just writing what comes to mind and not stopping. When your done, you can always go back and edit later. I look forward to reading more, especially about this mysterious David. P.S. If you can, look into a book called "Musashi" by Eiji Yoshikawa. I may provide good inspiration.
gunslingery 2008-03-13 ch 3,	abuseYea this chapter was good and all i like the idea of the blind guy trainin kenji. But i think you should make the part when kenji first met david more beliveable, if somone is watching me and fires somthing i didnt know kenji should have tried to fight him or something other than that its really good.
Sabio Cigaro 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseYou're right... I'll introduce some in the next chapter. Thanks!
gunslingery 2008-03-11 ch 2,	abusegood job like it alot but why does kenji seem perfect you shoul introduce some of his flaws
Kingdom Come 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is a nice start to what could be a very promising story. The bond between Kiji and Juusan read very well and your descriptions of characters are good. I understand that Kiji is good, but I hope you throw a few challenges at him when you continue this story. Good character writing is a love/hate relationship. If you really what them to shine, give them hell. Look forward to reading more!
gunslingery 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abusethis was a good start if leaves you wanting more updte soon and ill be sure to read

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