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| Winter92 2008-09-29 ch 2,  | abuseHes a were-tiger,cat? |
| FM Radio 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseI love this! It's so awesome, and Jeb sounds so hot...*sighs* too bad he's Quinn's. The only thing I don't like is that this seems to be missing closure. It has an ending, but the ending is more like an ending to a chapter, rather than an ending to a oneshot. I really don't mean to offend by saying that, but it's the way I feel. Maybe if you added an epilogue? |
| Sakura5584 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abuselol. Carlisle 4m twilight.(he got turn into a last name) over all...cute story...too short though... |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abusei can't wait for the nxt chapter, update soon! |
| Sami-loves-you 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOkiee first thing first: Happiee Birfday darling! Second: I absoulty loved yer this storiee!it was greatly, greatly written Third: I think you should add on, I was very sad to see it come to an end! =D |
| Hannah 2008-03-11 ch 2, anon. | abusewow. That whole kiss thing hit a little close to home lol. That's how I got my FIRST kiss...playing cards...it was the bet...come to think of it the guy had a tongue ring too...interesting...lol. Definately a new favourite...would love if it could be a full story though:( it seemed so short! I WANT MORE lol |
| Annariette 2008-03-10 ch 2, | abusethat's it?! |
| Zatyrmoon 2008-03-09 ch 2, | abusenice... keep going, can't wait to read the next chapter :) seems fairly unique compared to some others, and the spelling doesn't give me a head ache! (not that I should complain, since I'm a dyslexic and the worst speller on the planet lol) |
| Oyoa 2008-03-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseOHMYGOODNESS! I loved this! And I loved that you mentioned Stephanie Meyers (one of my fave stories... He he he...). But yeah... aww... I love your guys man... Hmm... WAIT... I MISSED YOUR BIRTHDAY... DIDN'T I? *is going to go check email* |
| Sour Lullaby 2008-03-09 ch 2, | abuseYOU ARE AMAZING! AH! *dies* Omg I am soo in love with Jeb right now it's not even funny... the tongue piercing clicking, the Tim Burton movies, the playing Blackjack (love it) with skittles... you absolutely rock! This was an awesome birthday present and now I'm feeling bad and thinking of making your jack and sally sequel longer... eh... Anyways, thanks so much and great great job with this! |