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Reviews For: Piper’s Hidden Kiss - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

l0v3abl3
2008-07-22
ch 2,
abuseAw. That's so cute and sweet.

- l0v3abl3
gulistanlik
2008-07-22
ch 2,
abuse*SQUEE*

Yep, I have tears in my eyes and a big stupid smile on face! Dammit, are guys really this sweet? I hope so, or even more so. Wow. Piper has found her happy continuation. I say continuation because 'ending' means she's coming to an end when really, it's a happy continuation, on from Rae adopting her. =D

gulistanlik
Hyperroll
2008-06-17
ch 2,
abuseokay, so this started out pretty predictably, but by the end you had me entranced. it was so sweet, so lighthearted, and yet so real. i like how the characters actually have some depth. i feel that family is the main source of conflict in everyone's lives and you capture that beautifully.

even though it started out kind of rocky for me, i wound up loving it. amazing.
unknownaliases
2008-06-12
ch 2,
abusethis is lovely. i'm in tears.
shy green rock
2008-06-04
ch 2,
abuseThe whole hidden kiss is so adorable. Man, I'm just falling in love with your stories here. Oh I also like how it's college and Gemma and Ryan are still together. haha
courtney
2008-05-25
ch 2, anon.
abusethat is the cutest thing i have ever seen..."i'll get it someday. when you're ready to give it away..i'll be there to get it"...ugh, that's awesome. please finish this story, i want to read more about chris and piper, they're so cute together. please.
Jaeiyola
2008-05-18
ch 2,
abuseAhh, the last line just sums everything together. I love it.
Ambergirl1029
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abusehello,

since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams

thank you,

Amber
ms. thorek
2008-04-28
ch 2,
abusei think the ending was perfect. it leaves the reader wishing that they'd end up together at the same time wondering if they would really end up together. it's different from the usual stories one reads where everything is completely wrapped up in the end, where every loose end is tucked away. one gets to feel what the characters would have felt with the uncertain promise of a beautiful relationship in the future.
theslykit
2008-04-19
ch 2,
abusefreaking! your stories drive me crazy!! makes me constantly wish to have romance like that in my life!! you are what i call a tortuous writer!! :D
Lily Llynn
2008-04-15
ch 2,
abuseI like how this one has character development, and I do kinda like how you brought back a character from a previous oneshot. (: Anyway, I think for this story, it would've been better if this had become a full short story (that's kinda oxymoronic) because I think this should've gone more into the development of their romance. I don't think they would've happened so quickly, even though she already kissed him, and I'd also love to see more of his background since we see hers. But this is cute, and a good twoshot, and I'm glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added it to our c2. 9:
Angel of Ink
2008-03-24
ch 2,
abuseSwet. :)
candlekitty
2008-03-23
ch 2,
abuseI cried when I read her mom's letter. Wow.
Kateena
2008-03-21
ch 2,
abuseReally sweet :-)
duckliy543
2008-03-20
ch 2,
abuseomgod that was amazing! i absloutly loved it
amazing amazing amazing job!
and the last lines were wow.
amazing!
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