Your convinction in your belief shines true in this poem. It's very nice to see someone that really means what they are saying. Good job!

Twilight Starr

Yay for Jesus content! My favorite kind of content. Now on to more serious things.

Honestly, the flow was lacking. I think if you moved the part about 'my light and my faith' up with 'against anxiety' it would put it in a better order.

-J.A.

Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).