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| Faith Adeline 2008-05-08 ch 4,  | abuseugh, evil cliffy lol. Good chapter, I liked it. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-04-10 ch 3, | abuseCatchy. Keep posting. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-07 ch 3, | abuseIt feels like this is going a bit fast, but it's good. just be sure to pace things. Keep it up and update soon :) Faith |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-10 ch 2, | abusegood job. Keep it up! Faith |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseSo far, this isn't like Laurell's novels. I would know, I love them haha. Great job, although all the baby's were sorta getting on my nerves haha. The only thing is I would put the memory in italics, just so the reader doesn't get confused. Other than that, keep it up! Faith |