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| Lily Llynn 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm a little confused as to how she missed the bell (how do you do that?), but otherwise, this was a creative, cute onesoht, and I liked it. I don't like how she listens to music in class (okay, I'll admit it, I'm somewhat of a goody-goody) and ignores her peers. Actually, I like Ethan and Red a lot better than Angela, heh. But this was very creative, especially with the Post-It paper planes, and I'm glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added it to our c2. (: |
| TCATH57 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI love all your stories this one is great even though it is sortad short I like it all the same. |
| x.betweenthelines 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abusecute! so cute! |
| LiMay 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abusesuper sweet! LOVE IT! |
| SparklingStar25 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusecute |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseSweet. Simple & sweet. I liked it so much! The pink post it planes have got to be one of the sweetest gifts ever! |
| Kellybear 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseCute. Very original. I liked it. :) |
| Pinkamoo 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseReality does bite. It pissed me off too. People are always making excuses for things in stories going, "Well, that's what happens in the real world." But they don't even see the point of WRITING: To -fix- the things that are wrong in the world, and give people a happy ending. Your story is cute :p |
| mia5081 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, and the flirtation technique! lol Great job =) ~Mia |
| Microsuede Mouse 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseAww, I like it. It's true that it could be smoothed out a little, but it's fairly well written for what was never intended to be the final product. And you're right - the world does need more fluff! Anyway- good job. |
| x3life 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseaww this was so cute!! i loved how she didnt turn around and totally ignored him =) haha |
| GrannyP 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI found that to be rather charming! So cute! I hesitate to say that ending was a bit "unrealistic" because in all my years I have discovered that the most unrealistic things that we read (and write) in stories are usually the ones based on events that have actually happened. And I did love the Post It note airplane concept. It sounds like something I would be fascinated with, but no one else would find it as amusing as I do. Thanks for writing this! It was well worth the read! |
| artistic dreamer 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusehow sweet! i love the words on the paper airplane! it's so romantic! Ethan is gonna make such an awesome boyfriend! i wished this wasn't just a one shot! keep writing more please! |
| found.eventually 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness. He's such an adorable, romantic dork! I can't think of anything else to say except for the fact that I loved it! Paper plane by post-it notes is just such a cute idea! |
| Noie 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThank you for the fluff. My world certainly needs as much as it can get! Thanks again. |