I love this story. And I want my own Michael... All I know is damn crazy jocks who love to annoy me. And tell me that Americans don't eat moose. But regardless, I want cute computer nerd... I'm pouting. And giggling.

I love harassing those jocks. One in particular. We flirt, although not seriously, and it is soo much fun seeing my best friend's reaction.

My BFF is an emo chick, but she was this aversion to blood... She's not mainstream.

You read Meg Cabot, right? Princess Diaries? Grandmother called Mia a /poulet/ AKA hooker AKA chicken?

lalalalaloved it!

Haha poor Michael! I loved your epilogue... and the rest of the story. It was great! =)

i've been laughing my butt off for like ten minutes straight, and my family thinks I've gone insane. But this is just so good, and so hilarious! I love the plot and all the characters.

As if Perth's better than Melbourne! Someone hasn't been looking in the right places...

But great story!

oh my god! this is freaking hilarious!

Cute ending, interesting story. I say you could have developed the relationship throughout the entire story between Michael and Holly a little more. Also some parts were kind of weird. I think on Michael's part it was KIND OF developed, but Holly's part was a little lacking, because you made it seem like a purely physical attraction on her part. Maybe if you had expressed some of those emotions that she thought about right before she kissed him then it would all fit together. But I like your explanation for things. I never did suspect Duke, just because he seemed so caught up in his football stuff the entire time. I thought it was a little weird that he would voluntarily tell Lindsay about all his plans, when he killed his brother just for finding out. Does that mean he cheated on Lindsay a lot too? And what was with the terrible poems? Lol.

Anyways, cute story.

-- Alyssa

Ah, I read this because you were nominated at SKOW and it pretty much gave everything away if I was to read this from the start--I will--but very cute. Nice job. :]

And by the way, traditionally, Cupid is Aphrodite's son.
So when they were a couple - it made me laugh.
But incest isn't cool!

So I had a suggestion, when I was reading Zoey's interactions with the main character (whose name has totally abandoned me).
Maybe you should make her about five or six? I mean, I don't have a huge amount of experience with kids, but my niece is three and she might say things like that, but no one would be able to hear her, and she certainly wouldn't ask before coming into a room. And they best she has in perceptiveness is offering a hug when you're crying.
But it's just a suggestion.
Oh, and I suppose I should include that your story makes me happy. I like it.

haha so cute!

xx

Don't you mean coach? Or is it different down yonder?

So I totally reviewed this around two weeks ago, but FP was PMSing that day (it was one of those days the log-in page wasn't working) so I lost my lost and heartfelt (*cough*) review.

Anyway...I just came back now to try and remember what I wrote that day...I think the most crucial thing is:

DID SHE GET BACK HER STRAIGHTENER?!?

LOL...I mean, how can a girl live without hers? Mine broke a couple weeks ago (THE NIGHT BEFORE MY GRAD PICTURE SITTING AH!) so I can feel her pain at being separated from it...

Jeez...I don't remember what else I wrote...but I loved the letters back and forth from DLS...and I liked the relationship between Lorraine and Holly - they weren't the stereotypical evil-stepsisters towards each other...

Since I coughed 11 times during this review, I think I should go drown myself in cough syrup again...(okay, there's number 12).

Tata!
- Rebekah

i don't think that i stoped smiling at any point at all in that :)infinity

you should not pick on fictionpress like that and those muckup day pranks were pretty nasty yay