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| Aquafied 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abusebeautiful. just beautiful. |
| Doc Blood 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseIn what must one believe for the bells to sound like beauty unbound? At first, I thought a belief in God and worship inside the church, but you set the origin of the sound outside the church. That might imply that belief only "sounds" like beauty unbound. OK. I've confused myself. Well done. Peace, Doc |
| Ygg 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI was struck by the unusual imagery of "bells from the churchyard" you've used to convey the deep, silent beauty of belief. This image is even more enhanced by the use of "unbound", as if beauty is actually bound by not-believing, not-feeling the wonderful mysteries of the unknown. Wow this is an extraordinarily profound Haiku! |