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| Aquafied 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abusethis confuses me a bit if i dont look at it from a totally psychadelic point of view |
| Basara 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuselights and all for the silent momentum... nice... |
| Ryan Schiff 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI don't really get the last line but its an interesting concept. The title gives it away, I guess, but remember that haiku arent supposed to have proper titles. The thought of something going 'silently rainbow' is interesting in its own way... but I'm just not sure if it makes sence in a haiku... |