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| Ygg 2008-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseQuite intriguing analogy! Love the symbolism behind the images you convey. Good work! |
| PrincessPeaches 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! ONe problem though, the first line has 6 sylabells (I'm aware that is spelt wrong, but you get what I mean right?). Otherwise it's sweet! |