 Elizabeth 2009-07-18 . chapter 43 fantastic story, really truly great.
I would like to hear more about beth though.
Oh... And more descriptive sex scenes. Haha ;). |
 Dahlia Black 2009-07-16 . chapter 43(gasp) Not Jimmy! He's my favorite male character! That's what he gets for being a druggie. Gotta learn some time.
Hmm, some kind of designer drug? And was that chick his cousin? |
 Dahlia Black 2009-07-16 . chapter 42Gah, Sean is such a scumbag. Beth deserves better. |
 Dahlia Black 2009-07-16 . chapter 41Hah, friggin Melissa.
Aww, no Claire/Evan. (sigh) Evan will be devestated! |
 Mike101 2009-07-16 . chapter 43Yeah, man! I'm loving it! 43 was really sick, felt really real.
What was Jimmy actually on though?
Thanks a lot for taking the time to put this up, man. And even though it's probably not for me, I appreciate it anyways!
Can't wait for more,
Gamache |
 ManyManyNames 2009-07-16 . chapter 43Once again, LOVE LOVE LOVE Jimmy. This chapter was a good insight into what he lives with, but i kind of wished there was a little more. Maybe more about the girl, maybe more about his Uncle, maybe you can show a little of the torture his family puts him through, but idk. You are the author, it is your choice!
I loved the chapter where Claire tells them she doesn't like Evan and then having it immediately followed by a Sean chapter. Sadly, he reminds me of a guy i know, so he's very realistic. I love this story a ot and cannot wait for an update asap!
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 april and the phantom 2009-07-15 . chapter 40this story is absolutely amazing. seriously, the characters and relationships are all so well developed. i am really impressed with your writing style and can't wait to read more. i hope you publish this someday because it's really that incredible. |
 Dahlia Black 2009-07-15 . chapter 40Evan's Irish, huh? Nice.
Can't wait for him to hook up with Claire. |
 Dahlia Black 2009-07-15 . chapter 39Man, gotta love Jimmy. He's just so mellowed out. (My favorite character.) |
 ManyManyNames 2009-07-15 . chapter 40This one was short, but the previous one was really good! An insight into the relationship between Beth and Jimmy. I LOVE LOVE LOVE Jimmy! And i'm sure i've said that before, but he's got such a great personality and he's very well developed. All of the characters are really... now that i think of it.
I hope yo resolve the breakup in some way. I hope Beth doesnt go back to Sean! He's an ass!!
All right. UPDATE SOON!
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 Mike101 2009-07-15 . chapter 40Nice man, it's looking great!
Awesome to see you writing again!
I'm a greedy bitch, I can't wait for more!:) |
 Dahlia Black 2009-05-05 . chapter 38Yay:) You updated! *does happy dance*
The perfect cure for sick days is reading Strange Days. |
 Mike101 2009-05-04 . chapter 38Man, this is great! I couldn't have imagined Chapter 36 being any better! I especially like the ending of it.
Thanks for the birthday present man!
I can't wait to read more! |
 ManyManyNames 2009-05-04 . chapter 38FINALLY!
I MISSED THIS STORY!
btw, i want more soon!
i love Sean and Mary's relationship, its been a while so if im mixing up the characters i am SO sorry...
but i really like Claire and Jimmy in general. Claire is cool and i like her as a chick, but i LOVE Jimmy. He's just that druggie that you want to cuddle, at least i do... :)
i want more as soon as possible!
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 Mike101 2009-04-08 . chapter 35UPDATE BICH! Please, it's killing me dude:) I'll even offer to type it for you lol. Heck, I've got nothing better to do. |