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| Doc Blood 2008-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseMe like pome. It good. :0) Peace, Doc |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseInteresting examples of cross usage. I like how youve detailed this enough to allow numerous interpretations. Excellent haiku. MD:77. |
| Ygg 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you've splitted the words.. it adds an ambiguity which makes the reader ponder. Good work! |
| Autumn Reflections 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseLove it. :P |