 Duckie 2009-10-05 . chapter 1 Hey I like register Seven! The mike works better on that one then any of the other ones. Anyways nice poem, I like it. |
 Besieged.Infection 2008-12-10 . chapter 1Hey; this was pretty funny. I found myself chuckling to myself, which I don't really like doing in a crowded school library. Anyways; the format wasn't unusual, which made it easy to read and didn't take away from the poem in the least. Of course, after I read this I finally know what they meant in the movie 'The Love Letter' when they said "Tell him not to quit his day job", no offense. No offense at all; it just helped me understand it.
Anyways, I find myself remembering Shel Silverstein, and that's pretty cool cause she's awesome. Anyways; I was confused at first how you wrote it. AGHE! The bell rang. I'd make this longer, BUT I DON'T HAVE TIME! By by!
B.I.-sama |
 Peanuts Factory 2008-04-12 . chapter 1I just read it right through.
Interesting. |
 Glowing Aura 2008-04-03 . chapter 1Haha...oh wow, I can relate to this to a point (I work at Payless). Good God, cutomers can be so dumb. :-/ They think you can magically do whatever best fits them, huh? -shakes head-
Anyway, I relaly enjoyed this poem and all the conversations in it. |
 Adenil 2008-03-17 . chapter 1My lord... it is brilliant. Don't know, the superviser was really a nice touch, but it isn't very poemy. Do you know what I mean? Never thought about how the cashier has to feel with all the hustle and bustle going on.
Ma’am, you need to calm down, ma’am
You’re making your son cry.
The funniest lines. Poor kid, mom making him cry like that. |
 multiples of six 2008-03-14 . chapter 1Haha.. I couldn't handle working in customer service. Nice poem.. |
 Tohru Daihikashousha 2008-03-10 . chapter 1lmao that's great. Nice piece of work.. did that seriously happen? Sheesh. People these days. XD |
 zcst4eva 2008-03-10 . chapter 1God, I know how you feel! I work at a concession stand at the local stadiums during the football and baseball seasons and I'm currently working as a cashier at a local resturaunt, and boy those customers can be a handfull!! I mean, if you can't afford to eat at an upscale resturaunt then don't come!! I sympathize and empathize!! |
 authordream4life 2008-03-10 . chapter 1Mildly humorous, but very short and without a plot or any of that good stuff. It was written well, though. Good job. |