Whoa... creepy.

That was a twist I didn't expect. It was clever how you were setting that boy up as a killer, but you turned it around and had the woman kill him. Brilliant.

Everyone else has said this, but It's really cool how she was the murderer not him. You set her up to be the innocent victim, even though she stalked him, so switching that was awesome.

Your writing itself is good, you didn't use lots of big words that weren't necessary and your descriptions were well done and well selected. I love stories with a twist (if you read either of my short stories you will see) and yours is a great one, although I probably would have had her simply kill him there instead of have the report, but that's my preference.

I thought it would be the other way around-you know, the guy being the murderer and the victim being the girl. Very good read. I enjoyed it :)

That was actually really amazing. I was expecting the guy to be the murderer so I loved how you switched that around and made a twist. It was really really good and i loved it! Good job!