Reviews for Underwater Killings

Autumn Sacrifice 2008-05-08 ch 4,	abuseNice, nice, nice. It'd be better if you added more description to the sharks and the surroundings. I want to see the roll that this necklace plays. How will he get out of it?! ^.^ Update soon.
Autumn Sacrifice 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abuseI'm kind of confused about what's going on, but I'll probably get it as it's updated. I found quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, so you'll want to tirple-check your work before posting it. I'd also like to comment on the description of Tyler. If his hair was red, but in fact dyed black, then you should call it such; otherwise it would get confusing.