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Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseI love the cosmic imagery, particularly in the second verse. Fantastic metaphor. However in the second verse did you mean to type "her rays don't find ME anymore" ? Also, the final line doesn't really seem to fit, it breaks the rhythm.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is breathtaking! I love your theme here - comparing a loved one to the sun. The imagery/metaphors are captivating. (: I like how you got the stars and the moon involved, too. I think you made a typo in 'her rays don't find anymore'. Should it be don't find 'me' anymore? =P A lovely poem.